Super Granny (A.K.A. Cameron Woodard) <Tab/>"Stop, evil super villain!" Super Granny shouted forcefully. <Tab/>"Never," exclaimed Speedy. "I WILL reveal your true identity!!" <Tab/>It was a battle of super hero and super villain. Cameron Woodard simply could not stand the thought of everyone at Rockland District High School knowing he was the one and only Super Granny. If his …
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…friends and their nickname for me, Super Granny. I know it says i got an 80%, but i don't hink it deserves that. My teacher was really easy on us, and i don't think this essay should deserve higher than an 80%. Suggestions for Improvement -less adjectives -earlier climax -longer storyline -more information about characters -more informative about settings -better descriptions of characters -use proper grammer for quotes instead of slang -better super villians -more super villians